Cold or Follow-Up Email Copywriting

Hugh Fraser

E Mail Subject Line:

Precision Toasting—Everyday ____________________________________________

Hi Susan:

Congratulations on your recent restaurant changes.

But with changes come challenges. Like precision toasting. Like no wasted toast. Like special order toasting.

If this describes your situation, there’s a solution for you.

Precise toasting options for your customer orders—light, medium, and dark—with just a push of a button. That’s it. No confusing dials. No mistakes, No wasted bread. Whether it’s a bagel or thick toasting.

And note this, slices next to a special order are unaffected.

At Advantage Kitchenware we have a stainless-steel conveyor toaster with a full two-year warranty that leads the way with precise toasting—everyday.

So, would you like to see this commercial toaster in action?

If so, be our guest for a personal, short video-demo. Just email me your preferred time and day.

Sound good?

Jim

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Jim Nelson – VP Sales